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This old head says A all the way, baby!
Giving each thought its own line allows me to contemplate each briefly before continuing.
It’s like white space; a welcome pause.
❤️ the poem!
Love A! I especially like the lines
"as fun as it would be is the same as
wishing you are me is the same as
wishing I am you is the same as"
I like that you most often don't rhyme in your poems so that when you do rhyme it feels particularly special. And the inverse in the third line is added fun. Yay
This old head says A all the way, baby!
Giving each thought its own line allows me to contemplate each briefly before continuing.
It’s like white space; a welcome pause.
❤️ the poem!
Love A! I especially like the lines
"as fun as it would be is the same as
wishing you are me is the same as
wishing I am you is the same as"
I like that you most often don't rhyme in your poems so that when you do rhyme it feels particularly special. And the inverse in the third line is added fun. Yay